The first time I was I
senior high school, I got the first rank in my class and that made me
really proud.
Actually I’m not a student who very
actively in class. I studied as usual like what my friends did too. Then, I’m a
student who rarely answered my teacher questions. Because I always felt afraid
if my answer is wrong or not appropriate. And the bad habits that I always did
is talked with friend. Why I said that’s my bad habits? Because I talked with
my friends while studied. I like to talked with my friends even I felt bored
with the course.
But I more
comfortably and diligently when study at home. I felt more comfortably while
studied individually at home. I always repeated the material in my house. I
felt more focus even studied at home. Because no one who will disturb me. So, I
studied more effectively at home. In short, when the headmaster announced the
class rank in every class. I really felt surprised and cried too. At the time,
I got the first rank in my class. Actually I felt confused, why the ordinary
student like me?. And from the first time I make my friend felt jealous to me.
But who’s cares. The special thing are I’m happy. I was happy because I be able
to make my parents felt proud with me.
Hello Arini, nice to read your post, but i have something that I want to tell to you.
BalasHapusoverall, it's good experience.
but still, you need to pay more attention on grammar. and your idea's structures.
besides that there are also some mistake on your word. e.g "Actually I’m not a student who very actively in class." i think, the word "actively" should be active.
but overall it's good to read your post..
don't forget to visit mine. thx :D
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BalasHapusHello Arini, nice to visit your blog :D
BalasHapusI like your experience Arini, but as Adi said before you may pay attention on grammar, structure and mechanics in your writing because I found some mistakes on it. Actually Arini, You must make a thesis statement in your writing to make the reader get the point about your story and don't forget to put the conclusion also. I think it will be better if you make all the paragraph more structural and each paragraph have a main topic that relate with the thesis statement.
Overall, you have done a good job Arini
Keep working :D