Jane Amelia is a friendly Chinese girl
with white teeth that makes her smile look so beautiful. She is my best friend, we are very compatible
and she has same hobby with me. I’m very happy about that.
We has same hobby. We like to run in
the afternoon, watching Korean movie, and also has the same future. If we
walked together, everyone will looked at us and said that we’re twins.
I really loved her smile. Jane has a white teeth and that makes her
smile look so beautiful and nice too. Jane
likes to snacking, that’s why she has a same body with me. Because we likes
snacking anytime and anywhere, we are scared become fat. Because it will disturb
our future that is to have a body like Korean girl band. We like to watch Korean
movie especially if the actor is Lee Min Ho. Three years ago we are very fat girls
and he becomes our passion to lose weight. Therefore, we really diligent to do
some exercise. Every afternoon we like to run together. That’s why I really
compatible with her. We have a silly dream, but we really do that.
Now I realize that Jane is my best friend
that very compatible and she has same hobby with me. Best friend that I ever
had. We are Chinese, she has narrow eyes same with me, and we have the same
future. I’m proud to have best friend like her.
Hello Arini. nice to read your post and I wonder if I could meet your friend, and prove is her really similar with you. hehe
BalasHapusOkay, overall that's good paragraph but it think you need to pay more attention on your ideas structure. what you want to say first, second, and third, should be structured. last pay more attention on grammar.
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