Rabu, 28 Mei 2014

ANOTHER PLAN

When I was in junior high school, something happened and it changes my life. I’ve lost a part of my life,  my parents decided to separate. I’m as a daughter should accept the very bad decision ever.

            Actually, I felt disappointed. They decided to separated because of my mother's mistakes. My father get out from our house. Why they must do that? I can’t speak anything, just crying all day long. I lost my father.

            At the moment, that’s problem changed my life. I saw a different thing in my house. At that time, I couldn’t saw my father everyday. I can meet him only on the weekend. Actually, I want to scolded my mother because this all happened because of her mistakes. I felt angry at the time. But I retrain my self, because I realized that my mother unintentionally made that mistakes. From this problem, I started thinking more positive and mature. I tried to solved this problem more patient and positive.

            One day, I tried to recover the situation. I had doubt but I keep trying. Finally, I appealed my mother to apologize to dad. Believe or not, my father forgive my mother. Although I has tried hard, but they still on their decisions to separate.

            I’ve lost a part of my life and my parents decided to separate. But from that situation, I can know what is the importance of the integrity of a family. I can learn about self esteem. Self esteem is not about when you’re very shy to admit it. And sometime we have to accept the very bad things of life. Because now I realize that god have another plan to make our life more better.

3 komentar:

  1. Hi Arini... it's nice to visit your blog.

    I think, I know that feel how hard to accept the reality, but hopefully you could be strong.. :)

    overall, your writing is good, but you need to pay more attention on your grammar. there are some mistake verb. remember to use V2 if you want to make a past tense.
    e.g "Why they must do that? I can’t speak anything, just crying all day long. I lost my father." the word can't should be couldn't, crying should be cried.
    for me you've done a good job. keep working. :D

    BalasHapus
  2. hai Arini. your story is really touched me. I hope you can be strong and enjoy your life as usual with your smile :)

    can I give you a comment about your writing? I think adi's comment is correct you must pay attention using simple past tense, especially about the pattern of past tense using v2.

    nice to visit your blog and dont forget to visit my blog back :)

    BalasHapus
  3. hi arini, sorry for being late to comment in your blog,
    you have the hardest time in your life Rin, but life must go on, nice story but need to pay attention consistent with your grammar such as in sentence "When I was in junior high school, something happened and it changes my life" but overall your writing is good. keep writing,,,

    BalasHapus