Writing Assignment : Outline from " Share Your Happiness Trough Hugs "

Outline Paragraph " Share Your Happiness Trough Hugs " 
from Adi Kertayasa ( http://adikertawhitesakra.blogspot.com/2013_11_01_archive.html)

Outline

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Title                             : " FREE HUGS " why not ?

Topic Sentence            :  There was a tall man with long hair and wearing eyeglasses was holding the board and wandering around the town square to offer the happiness to the other. At first, people ignored the man.

Major Supporting sentence I:

- At first, people ignored the man.

Minor supporting sentence:

·         They try to keep the distance with the man, may be they think he is insane or else, some response by smiling, and some take picture/video with their gadget to the man with ‘Free Hugs’ sign

·         But, the man doesn’t give up, he keep wandering around the city while offering the free hug.

·         Next, there were elder woman who carry many plastic bags change this situation.

·         This act attracts the people to accept, to support and to do the free hug.

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.Major Supporting sentence II:

-          Many people attracted to this campaign, everybody whether male, female, old and young wanted to get a free hugs from the man, it so touching.

Minor supporting sentence:

·         Unfortunately, bad thing still happen.

·         The police prohibited ‘Free Hugs’ campaign.

·         Some people look tried to explain to the police.

·         After that, the man who starts this campaign tried to gather signatures from society to show how many people support the activity. 

·         He gets 10.000 signatures from the societies who support this event.

·         Finally, this campaign still goes on, the society accepted the event

.Major Supporting sentence III:

- There are so many people in our environment that need us

            Minor supporting sentence:

·       It’s not only about money, status, power, but also about caring and loving.

·         No matter we born black, white, good, bad, handsome, beauty, but WE ARE SAME.

Concluding Sentence :

     At  last, no matter what is the gender, no matter we are young or old, but WE ARE SAME. Let’s pay more attention to them instead our individual. How selfish we are if we ignore them? By hugging, it will help people. At least, it decreases their pain, agony, desperate and sadness from being alone. So what are you waiting for? Lets take care for each other